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Writing

Writing is where most people get stuck. It only moves with feedback: write, get it marked against the descriptors, rewrite. For an overall 9 you need at least 8.5 here, so every essay needs feedback and a rewrite.

  • 60 minutes
  • Task 1: 150+ words, 20 min
  • Task 2: 250+ words, 40 min
  • Task 2 counts double

How it is marked

Four criteria, 25% each. This is a summary in plain words. Read the official public band descriptors on ielts.org as well.

The four Writing criteria at band 6 and band 7
CriterionWhat the examiner checksBand 6Band 7
Task Achievement (T1) / Task Response (T2)Did you answer every part of the question?Position is there but not always clear; ideas are not fully developedClear position throughout; main ideas are extended and supported
Coherence & CohesionIs it easy to follow?Linking works but is mechanical or repetitiveLogical progression; a clear central idea in every paragraph; linkers used flexibly
Lexical ResourceHow wide and precise is your vocabulary?Enough words for the task; some errors in word choiceLess common words used with awareness of style and collocation
Grammatical Range & AccuracyHow varied and correct is your grammar?Mix of simple and complex sentences; errors are common but rarely block meaningVariety of complex structures; frequent error-free sentences

At band 8 the differences are precision and control: most sentences are error-free, vocabulary is used naturally and precisely, and paragraphing is always appropriate.

Task 1: four paragraphs

  1. Introduction. Paraphrase what the chart shows in one sentence.
  2. Overview. Two sentences on the biggest trends or differences, with no numbers. Without an overview, Task Achievement cannot go above 5.
  3. Details A. One group of data with numbers and comparisons.
  4. Details B. The other group.
Useful language for Task 1
PurposeLanguage
Going uprose steadily, increased sharply, climbed to, saw a significant rise
Going downfell gradually, dropped dramatically, declined to, saw a slight decrease
Top and bottompeaked at, reached a high of, hit a low of, bottomed out at
No changeremained stable at, levelled off, stayed relatively constant
Up and downfluctuated between X and Y
Comparingtwice as many as, slightly higher than, by far the largest, the figure for X was double that of Y
Approximatingjust over, nearly, roughly a quarter, the vast majority
Process (passive)the leaves are picked, then dried; once X is done; in the final stage
Mapswas replaced by, was converted into, was extended, a car park was built

Task 2: five question types

The five Task 2 question types
TypeQuestion looks likeYour introduction must
OpinionTo what extent do you agree or disagree?Say how far you agree
DiscussionDiscuss both views and give your own opinion.Name both views and give yours
Problem / solutionWhat are the causes? What can be done?Preview the causes and the solutions
Advantages / disadvantagesDo the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?Say which side wins. This is an opinion question.
Two-partWhy is this happening? Is it positive or negative?Answer both questions directly

Structure: introduction (paraphrase + your position), two body paragraphs with one main idea each, conclusion. Each body paragraph: point → explanation → example → link back.

The same idea at band 6, 7 and 8

  • Band 6

    Nowadays many people use the internet and it has a lot of good and bad effects on people.

  • Band 7

    Internet use has become almost universal, and this has brought considerable benefits as well as some serious drawbacks.

  • Band 8

    Near-universal internet access has transformed how people work and learn, although it has also exposed users to new risks, notably misinformation and the loss of privacy.

The band 8 version is not more "fancy". It is more precise: it names what changed (work and learning) and which risks (misinformation, privacy).

Band 5.5 to 6.0Fix the structure

Answer the question in a clear shape

What holds you back

  • No overview in Task 1.
  • Under the word count.
  • Your position is unclear or changes during the essay.

What to do

  • Use the four-paragraph structure for both tasks, every time.
  • Aim for about 170 and 270 words.
  • Write your position in the introduction and repeat it in the conclusion.

Band 6.0 to 7.0Develop and vary

Fewer ideas, better developed

What holds you back

  • You list four ideas instead of developing two.
  • Every paragraph starts with "Firstly", "Moreover", "Furthermore".
  • Simple vocabulary repeated (good, bad, people, things).

What to do

  • One main idea per paragraph: point → explanation → example → link.
  • Link with referencing: "this trend", "such measures".
  • Learn topic collocations (Lessons 5–7) and use them in essays.

Band 7.0 to 8.0Precision and control

Most sentences error-free

What holds you back

  • The same small grammar errors in every essay.
  • Words that are impressive but slightly wrong.
  • No time left to check your writing.

What to do

  • Keep a list of your 10 most frequent errors and proofread for them.
  • Use words you are sure of. Precise beats impressive.
  • Finish with 3 minutes to spare and check agreement, articles and plurals.

Band 8.0 to 9.0Natural and effortless

Writing that reads like an educated native speaker

What holds you back

  • Occasional slips in articles, prepositions or word choice.
  • Ideas that are correct but predictable or not fully developed.
  • Linking the reader notices, instead of linking that is invisible.

What to do

  • Every paragraph fully develops one clear idea with a specific example.
  • Read quality opinion writing (The Economist, Guardian comment pages) and note how ideas connect.
  • Have essays marked by an experienced teacher, and rewrite until no errors remain.

Ready to practise your Writing?

Write your answers to your teacher’s tasks and get a band for each criterion.

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